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The Distance by Margie; Fanfic that is awesome
Topic Started: Aug 19 2011, 11:02 PM (6,195 Views)
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This story is so incredible. I seriously check the site every day (sometimes several times a day) to see if you've updated. You're such a talented writer!
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Margie, your fanfiction is AMAZING. It's one I will always remember, and has totally blended with the show's canon, in my head. Andy and Sam run together, absolutely. Sam went out with a girl called Kate, yep. I just totally have taken that on board as my canon. It is so REAL, the way you write it. I forget that these things haven't actually happened on the show. :lol:
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Margie, you are a wonderful writer, your story is captivating my friends and i are reading it and always letting each other know when you've got a new chapter up. we read and discuss it.. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us.
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Charm


I have just discovered this story and it took me some time to catch up but I'm blown away this is so good.
It feels so realistic like you are there with them, love it.

Hope you post more cause I'm already addicted.
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Thanks again everybody!! I'm working endlessly on the next chapter, but I don't want to rush it, so it'll be a few days at the least. In the mean time, rewind that recording again and watch THE SCENE. That's what I've been doing :)
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It's a great story! I can't wait to read the next installment.
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SAFan23


I love that they got caught "stargazing" too, made me LOL!!
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icewitch


*squeaks*

A few days? LOL
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SAFan23


I may or may not have just re-read this story from chapter 1 today. and I may or may not have started tearing up in the chapter when Andy told Sam she was jealous and he said he's jealous too and they need space. That's a little embarrassing but a good testament to your writing ;)
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Natasha
Sep 6 2011, 06:11 PM
I may or may not have just re-read this story from chapter 1 today. and I may or may not have started tearing up in the chapter when Andy told Sam she was jealous and he said he's jealous too and they need space. That's a little embarrassing but a good testament to your writing ;)
don't feel bad. I did the exact same thing on Saturday. Ok I only read that chapter because I was looking for a line I'd used, but I actually sat back and wondered why I did that to them *L*
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Haha oh it wasn't a bad thing! I enjoyed the drama (and that "scene")! Every chapter you seem to add just little things that make me smile. You have a gift for writing these two!
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margie311
Sep 7 2011, 02:53 AM
Natasha
Sep 6 2011, 06:11 PM
I may or may not have just re-read this story from chapter 1 today. and I may or may not have started tearing up in the chapter when Andy told Sam she was jealous and he said he's jealous too and they need space. That's a little embarrassing but a good testament to your writing ;)
don't feel bad. I did the exact same thing on Saturday. Ok I only read that chapter because I was looking for a line I'd used, but I actually sat back and wondered why I did that to them *L*
Dude, you totally need to be proud of that chapter! No joke! That was one of the best, most RAW fight scenes between them and it was fantastic!

(don't know where the dude voice came from? lol)

Also, I may have also just reread the entire story again? :)
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I don't read alot of fanfics because most of them are just really bad no offence to any writers here don't get me wrong you all are good writers but I think most of the time
you are having hard time keeping them in characters and am sure that's really hard but as reader I can't enjoy a story when the characters are obviously out of character... Anyways this story is different from the others I just read all of it yesterday and It's perfect, and come to think of it I want McSwarek's relationship to be like this in S3 is that a lot to ask for? Lol!

Ps. Ugh hate writing from iPhone
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UltimateR
Sep 7 2011, 11:25 AM
I don't read alot of fanfics because most of them are just really bad no offence to any writers here don't get me wrong you all are good writers but I think most of the time
you are having hard time keeping them in characters and am sure that's really hard but as reader I can't enjoy a story when the characters are obviously out of character... Anyways this story is different from the others I just read all of it yesterday and It's perfect, and come to think of it I want McSwarek's relationship to be like this in S3 is that a lot to ask for? Lol!

Ps. Ugh hate writing from iPhone
I think if you hunt around, you'll find some really good stuff out in fanfiction land.

check out this feed http://s4.zetaboards.com/sandy_fans/topic/7971613/4/#new

There are four pages of replies with extremely well-loved authors waiting to be read.

Thanks for reading The Distance and enjoy!
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Yup, it's really a matter of personal taste - with over 1000 (!) archived stories, there should be something for everyone.

However, not many of them go "The Distance" B)

(let's encourage more writers to put stuff out there: we're going to need them during the longggg hiatus after tomorrow night's finale until Season 3 airs! :uhh: )
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I allways forget my password on fanfiction.net :blush: , but I still want to review your story!
Loved the last chapter! Their bickering is fun to read.
I can also identify myself a lot with Andy. She´s so stubborn and thinking things over, working it out in her head before talking with anyone. Love the way how you wrote their interaction in this part:

"Andy ran both her hands through her hair, gathered it together and pulled the elastic off her wrist and bound it up. Sam watched. It was a nervous habit. Keeping her hands busy while her mind raced behind her eyes. He stepped up to her and put a knuckle under her chin, tilting her head up. "I don't get it. What happened? Where are you right now?" he asked, a tiny bit of his annoyance fading away as he looked into her eyes.

She blew out a breath and looked down; she chickened out. She shook her head slightly. "I'm just trying to work something out in my head."

"What is it?"

She took a deep breath, and took a step back. "Just give me five minutes to get ready and I'll come with you." She gave him a quick smile. "We can talk about it later."



Btw, Your story was the final push to apply for a running group: it's called 'Start to run'. :D
My first class in this saturday!! Just wanted to let you know!


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trivia
Sep 7 2011, 04:02 PM


Btw, Your story was the final push to apply for a running group: it's called 'Start to run'. :D
My first class in this saturday!! Just wanted to let you know!


I've decided that I'm on a mission to convert everyone. *evil laugh* you will all run! you will all feel the endorphins!
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Sep 7 2011, 04:18 PM
trivia
Sep 7 2011, 04:02 PM


Btw, Your story was the final push to apply for a running group: it's called 'Start to run'. :D
My first class in this saturday!! Just wanted to let you know!


I've decided that I'm on a mission to convert everyone. *evil laugh* you will all run! you will all feel the endorphins!
Are you a runner? I don't know why, but I didn't even enterain the idea of you being a runner. B)
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[quote/]I've decided that I'm on a mission to convert everyone. *evil laugh* you will all run! you will all feel the endorphins![/quote]
I think I mentioned this when I was reviewing on ff.net, but each chapter makes me want to go and run...even though I hate it. I've been doing it for years, but no runner's high for me. Sigh. You are motivating me to do it anyway, though. And I really appreciate that. :D
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Sep 7 2011, 05:26 PM
Are you a runner? I don't know why, but I didn't even enterain the idea of you being a runner. B)
I am a runner, not as dedicated as Andy though because lately I would much rather curl up in bed and write fic ;) than go out and do 3 miles or 5 miles or whatever. But I have a race this weekend, so I guess I'll have to set it aside at least one day *L*
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