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The Witness by margie311
Topic Started: Nov 29 2011, 02:02 PM (7,267 Views)
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We finally get to read that loooooong feedback :drool: I hope I can soon find time to read!
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Chapter 7 is up!

Complete with nerdy visual aids. :)
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Excellent! So looking forward to it.
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margie311
Jan 9 2012, 04:58 PM
Chapter 7 is up!

Complete with nerdy visual aids. :)
Sorry to be a computer dork (she says, being a computer dork), but where are the visual aids? :blush:

I scanned through the doc, and only see text? I need help, or directions to an eye clinic perhaps? :o
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in the author's note, it says to check my profile ;)
stupid ff.net doesn't let you post links on the chapter pages
Edited by margie311, Jan 9 2012, 05:44 PM.
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margie311
Jan 9 2012, 05:44 PM
in the author's note, it says to check my profile ;)
stupid ff.net doesn't let you post links on the chapter pages
duh, and thanks!

(I'll read it when I'm back from the eye clinic! :D )
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Read and reviewed! Thanks for my afternoon reading :flower:
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Yeah simonson is listed as a bad guy but im at work and cant fix it. *fail*
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margie311
Jan 9 2012, 05:44 PM
in the author's note, it says to check my profile ;)
stupid ff.net doesn't let you post links on the chapter pages
if you put parenthesis around the period and a space before and after the parenthesis, you will be able to post the link.


Can't wait to read but since you warned us about how long it was going to be, I have to take care of a few things first.
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Since ff.net is not letting me write a review - amazing job with this chapter! Hopefully I'll remember to leave you a detailed review when I can get into the system again.

Love how you're using the flashbacks and thanks for both links - the map really helped me visualize.
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I can't review either, stupid FF.net... Anyway, once again, I loved it! I read it twice and went to sleep way to late!

I'll try and remember to post a review when FF will allow me again...
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Jan 10 2012, 05:16 AM
I can't review either, stupid FF.net... Anyway, once again, I loved it! I read it twice and went to sleep way to late!

I'll try and remember to post a review when FF will allow me again...
I seriously hate that site. Even the people who *did* get to review....those reviews aren't actually showing up on the site.

@Cythy and SoWritten and vixenali - thanks for reading even though it was "lengthy" and even though the site is.... ridiculously infuriating tonight.
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Newest chapter of "The Witness"....... :woot: :cheer:
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I know I freakin love this chapter. Well I love all of them really... Haha. The length is awesome too, and you really never want it to end anyway.
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Chapter 8!

And when the Word Count ticker says 18985, it's lying. I swear.
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TOTALLY wrong word count ;)

No surprise here, but i loooooove this chapter. I dont wanna spoil anything by talking about certain things yet but i basically died at a lot of different parts. heartbreaking stuff!
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Margie,

I can not review on FF STILL (5 weeks now) - so I will write it here. Your newest chapter is fantastic, and the flashbacks (both versions) were...WOW.... but I gotta tell you you are starting to depress me a bit now. The Distance was drama filled, but this is angst filled. I actually tear up a bit during your chapters.

Which, of course, is a testament to your absolutely AMAZING writing, but please, what on earth can I bribe you with to get you to update sooner? :flower: :halo:

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haha...um, pay me the same rate that my boss does, and I'll quit my job and stay home to write fic full time :)

P.S. - I'm hoping that since I already have a large chunk of Ch 11 done that the next update will be sooner. Just had some issues with 10. You know, mental problems :) And I'm getting that "you're depressing me" thing a lot. Let me just assure you, I am doing this as quickly as possible. I've cut SO MANY SCENES bc I'm also finding this incredibly difficult and just need to move things along.
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:rofl: If I could afford it, I would pay a few different people to write full time :wink: :haha:

Your writing is amazing, which is why it is so depressing - the angst and desperation of the situation is being portrayed so wonderfully. Hey, life isn't all sunshine and roses. but is a shred of hope coming up in the next chapter, maybe??? :whistle
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Hey, I like the depression - it shows that everything is not all flowers and sunshine. I feel that a lot of writers tend to write like that but the angst and desperation stories are the ones that get me hooked. I just hope you have a happy ending in mind (because my theory is that enough depressing things happen in life so the characters should always come out happy in the long run - but that is just me).

Ignore the "you're depressing me" comments and keep the angst in the story.
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