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By LosingControl92; My Fanfiction - Two New OneShots (06/06/12)
Topic Started: Dec 28 2011, 02:48 PM (3,023 Views)
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Update for Holidate :)

Chapter 7 - 10 Questions


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Btw, I love how you took Big Nickel lines and just spread them all over different scenes and made them fit. That was awesome!


&& thank you, it was one of my favourite episodes, so I really wanted to keep as much as the dialogue that I could :)
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I just finished reading Holidate. Me like!! You do a really good job of writing Sam and Andy and using the 1x10 dialogue. And raising it to M? I'm all for, but it would be good with staying just T. :woot:
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Thank you so much! Like I said, I loved the episode so I really wanted to keep a lot of the dialogue.
Ahh thank you, I've set out a plan for the story now so I know I will end up changing it to M (as long as I'm happy with it before uploading it).

Thanks again :)
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Jan 5 2012, 06:57 PM
Update for Holidate :)

Chapter 7 - 10 Questions


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Btw, I love how you took Big Nickel lines and just spread them all over different scenes and made them fit. That was awesome!


&& thank you, it was one of my favourite episodes, so I really wanted to keep as much as the dialogue that I could :)
Ok this was written so so well, you did GREAT with the questions! But that last scene was killer! You're evil for leaving it there! lol

I was using my mouse to click the arrow so I wouldn't see more than one line at a time of that last scene, I was so drawn into it that I didn't want my eyes to read ahead. lol.

Update asap!!! :flower:
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Ok this was written so so well, you did GREAT with the questions! But that last scene was killer! You're evil for leaving it there! lol

I was using my mouse to click the arrow so I wouldn't see more than one line at a time of that last scene, I was so drawn into it that I didn't want my eyes to read ahead. lol.

Update asap!!!


Thank you so much I've had such lovely feedback for this chapter, so I really appreciate it :)
Update coming soon :)
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New chapter for Holidate :)

Chapter 8 - Promise

Let me know what you all think :)

Oh and thanks to LAwoman for the help on this :)
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You gotta get 9 up asap!!! lol
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Sorry it took so long, but here's a holidate update...

Chapter 9 - Rules

Let me know what you all think :)
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LOVED IT. Will leave a review in the morning. :bedtime:
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Jan 15 2012, 01:17 PM
LOVED IT. Will leave a review in the morning. :bedtime:
Haha, thank so much!
Goodnight ;)
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Hope you can update super super super soon!!!
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Hope you can update super super super soon!!!
working on the upcoming chapters this second ;)
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Holidate update :)

Chapter 10 - See you around.

Let me know what you think.
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Jan 21 2012, 03:11 PM
Holidate update :)

Chapter 10 - See you around.

Let me know what you think.
Awesome! Looking forward to chapter 11!!!
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losingcontrol92
Dec 28 2011, 02:48 PM
Just a topic to link to all my fanfiction. I love knowing what others think so I would love it if you could review them, either on here or FF.
Oh and if you guys have any plot ideas or prompts, I'd love to have some ideas :)

I'll just list them here and then continue to edit the list as I do more :)

One Shots
Planning
Not Tonight

Complete
You Didn't Say Goodbye
Something Isn't Right

In Progress
Holidate
HI!!!! I ALREADY READ THOSE STORIES AND THEY ARE AMAZING .I'M BIGGEST FAN OF ROOKIE BLUE FANFICTION!!! I START READ HOLIDAY AND I LOVE IT!! I CAN WAIT WHERE THIS IS GOING!! :yes: :spaz: :wave:
yes, we are diferent, so we deal with it :)
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Awesome! Looking forward to chapter 11!!!


Thanks so much :hug:


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HI!!!! I ALREADY READ THOSE STORIES AND THEY ARE AMAZING .I'M BIGGEST FAN OF ROOKIE BLUE FANFICTION!!! I START READ HOLIDAY AND I LOVE IT!! I CAN WAIT WHERE THIS IS GOING!! :yes: :spaz: :wave:


Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed/enjoy them :flower:
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Sorry it's taken so long guys, I've been thrown in at the deep end with work for uni, along with me being ill and my sister being admitted for an operation today....
ANyways here it is;

Chapter 11 - Thanks.


another two chapters and we should be done :)
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New One Shot.
Filled with Valentine's day fluff;

Sickeningly Sweet

Would love to know what you think ....
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I thought you did a great job! I definitely don't mind the fluff on V-day! ;)
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Feb 15 2012, 04:22 AM
I thought you did a great job! I definitely don't mind the fluff on V-day! ;)
Haha, Thank you so much! :hug:
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