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Rookie Blue Fanfiction Part 3; open place for recommendations, etc.
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svugirl
Apr 26 2012, 04:55 PM
Oooh update! Am I ok to read it now or am I still gonna have to wait? :p
I think you should! Give me your opinion in Sarah :wink:
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Apr 26 2012, 04:57 PM
svugirl
Apr 26 2012, 04:55 PM
Oooh update! Am I ok to read it now or am I still gonna have to wait? :p
I think you should! Give me your opinion in Sarah :wink:
For you, I will. But if you give me only angst and then tell me it's ok to read it, I will throw flames at you. :p :p :p
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Apr 26 2012, 05:08 PM
For you, I will. But if you give me only angst and then tell me it's ok to read it, I will throw flames at you. :p :p :p
Uh-oh :p I think I can handle it though :wink:
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I'm reading now.

I love this part from the other chapter - It bothered her that she never felt comfortable with Luke showing his love for her in front of Sam, it didn't feel like he was showing his love either, more like he was marketing his territory. And even that just bothered her.

I used that with a post in the breaks the curse thread because I was talking about Luke being territorial. I love that you mentioned that in the story because he SO is.
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Thank you Hawley for telling me to wait for the update because the end of ch 3 made me go.... :yuk: and :eyeroll: hahahaha. Sam is such a liar about that part. :p

I wanna mention this part in ch 3....

Andy jumped and placed both feet on the sides of the treadmill, looking down at the band spinning under her. - Love those detailed descriptions! Keep writing like that. It makes it even easier to see in our heads. :)
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Oooh update! Am I ok to read it now or am I still gonna have to wait? :p
I think you should! Give me your opinion in Sarah :wink:
Loved Sarah. And I loved the honesty from Andy to both Sam and Sarah.

But Natalie and Luke are annoying me. :p I will scream if Natalie goes to Sarah's house. lol. I mean, that's a special thing for them in fanfic world....that Andy is the only girl Sam has brought to see Sarah. After all, it seemed from the way he talked that not many other than Andy know about what happened to Sarah and the reason why Sam became a cop. He opened up his heart more and made himself more vulnerable to Andy when he told her that. :wub:

Hope you fix the two knuckleheads soon. :)

You know I have to ask.....update coming soon? You're spoiling us with them, and that thrills me the updates are so close together. :flower:
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Update of "Accidents Don't Just Happen" by dcj: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7978093/4/Accidents_Dont_Just_Happen
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Apr 26 2012, 08:30 PM
Update of "Accidents Don't Just Happen" by dcj: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7978093/4/Accidents_Dont_Just_Happen
That table conversation between Sam and Andy was amazing...I just loved the unspoken meanings and the honesty.

But that is an evil place to end the chapter. :p
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Apr 26 2012, 09:37 PM
But that is an evil place to end the chapter. :p
But isn't ending a chapter with the reader begging for more (now) one of the signs of a good story?

And ending the story with the reader satisfied with the outcome, but sorry it's over, the mark of a great one? :p
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Apr 26 2012, 09:50 PM
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Apr 26 2012, 09:37 PM
But that is an evil place to end the chapter. :p
But isn't ending a chapter with the reader begging for more (now) one of the signs of a good story?

And ending the story with the reader satisfied with the outcome, but sorry it's over, the mark of a great one? :p
It's a fantastic story.

Like I said, amazing convo between the two at the table. :wub:
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Apr 26 2012, 10:34 PM
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Apr 26 2012, 09:50 PM
svugirl
Apr 26 2012, 09:37 PM
But that is an evil place to end the chapter. :p
But isn't ending a chapter with the reader begging for more (now) one of the signs of a good story?

And ending the story with the reader satisfied with the outcome, but sorry it's over, the mark of a great one? :p
It's a fantastic story.

Like I said, amazing convo between the two at the table. :wub:
It is an awesome story! I actually commented about the last line - I'm curious to know if she is going to follow the episode storyline or if Sam and Andy are going to have a conversation before doing anything since Andy kinda needs more info.
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Apr 26 2012, 07:55 PM
Loved Sarah. And I loved the honesty from Andy to both Sam and Sarah.

But Natalie and Luke are annoying me. :p I will scream if Natalie goes to Sarah's house. lol. I mean, that's a special thing for them in fanfic world....that Andy is the only girl Sam has brought to see Sarah. After all, it seemed from the way he talked that not many other than Andy know about what happened to Sarah and the reason why Sam became a cop. He opened up his heart more and made himself more vulnerable to Andy when he told her that. :wub:

Hope you fix the two knuckleheads soon. :)

You know I have to ask.....update coming soon? You're spoiling us with them, and that thrills me the updates are so close together. :flower:
Girl, you are making me smile by your comments! :) :flower:
Well, I`m working on the next chapter as we speak, so sometime today I hope :)
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Apr 27 2012, 02:59 AM
svugirl
Apr 26 2012, 07:55 PM
Loved Sarah. And I loved the honesty from Andy to both Sam and Sarah.

But Natalie and Luke are annoying me. :p I will scream if Natalie goes to Sarah's house. lol. I mean, that's a special thing for them in fanfic world....that Andy is the only girl Sam has brought to see Sarah. After all, it seemed from the way he talked that not many other than Andy know about what happened to Sarah and the reason why Sam became a cop. He opened up his heart more and made himself more vulnerable to Andy when he told her that. :wub:

Hope you fix the two knuckleheads soon. :)

You know I have to ask.....update coming soon? You're spoiling us with them, and that thrills me the updates are so close together. :flower:
Girl, you are making me smile by your comments! :) :flower:
Well, I`m working on the next chapter as we speak, so sometime today I hope :)
You just made me laugh and smile, thank you. I needed that.

Yay, looking forward to it! I love your writing speed. lol
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A 'Celery Stalk'

as opposed to my sloth/snail speed :(
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Apr 27 2012, 03:09 AM
as opposed to my sloth/snail speed :(
You need some motivation. :flower:

Did you go back and separate those paragraphs some? I was just wondering because I'll probably re-read it when you post the next update.
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A 'Celery Stalk'

nope I haven't done that yet... I've got a bunch of stuff on my plate right now.
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I gotcha. :)
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Apr 27 2012, 03:05 AM


Yay, looking forward to it! I love your writing speed. lol
I`m thinking you will be a little more pleased when you read the next chapter ;) I`m seriosly laughing and blushing my way trough writing it :p
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Uploading my next chapter now, get ready for some retraining! :wink:
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Apr 27 2012, 08:35 AM
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Yay, looking forward to it! I love your writing speed. lol
I`m thinking you will be a little more pleased when you read the next chapter ;) I`m seriosly laughing and blushing my way trough writing it :p
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8052126/5/Turning_Tables

Going to read now.

Hawley, aren't you proud of me for posting the link? :p
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